Late last night, I spotted two young children shivering underneath a large oak tree. They looked lost and my tummy was rumbling!
Can you write the next paragraph in this story? Remember to write in role.
How will you convince the children to come with you?
(Remember your gingerbread house!)
(Remember your gingerbread house!)
What do you plan to do with them?
I will get some delicious chocolate treats from my candy house/cottage and then I will put the treats in my bag. After that I will give it to the children, But I wont give it too them straight away. I'll live the bag in my hand until they follow me. I will put Hancel in a cage and lock him up and I will ask Gretal to be my servant. After that when Hancel gets more fatter I'll eat him and then I'll do the same thing with Gretal. I'll eat her all up.
ReplyDeleteI will persade the children to come with my by saying "Are you hungry little boy and girl?" (in a cakerly voice) If they say yes i will take them and in one second i will eat them in one gulp.
ReplyDeleteI will convince the children to come whith me by saying "are you so hungry and if I let you on a secret and you promise not to tell eneeybodey my house is made out of candy, giner bread, rock and all the worlds different sweets!" (in my croaky voice!) When they come with me I will roast them whith chille sauce.
ReplyDeleteI will convince the children to have some ceorial in my house then I will use my magic powers to turn them into ceorial then eat them in a nice round bowl.
ReplyDeleteI will persuade the children to come whit me by just saying "you children don't look very happy and you do look like you are starving would you like to come to me house I WILL MACK YOU FAT! (In a cackly voice). When they come home white me I will show of to them "haw likes chocolate and then eat the ugly one make his boold my tomato sauce I love my eivel plance.
ReplyDeleteI will say do you want some candy then they will say yes plese and then I will eat them with tomato and musterd sause.I will get them in my house and get hansel and keep on offering him food
ReplyDeleteI will them about walls dripping in fudge smarties falling from the seeling. then they will come in and I will say I will give you lots of sweets that you can smell te feedim dripping then trap them into the oven then finelly eat them.
ReplyDeleteI will eat hansel and Gretel but I nid a plan.
ReplyDeleteI would make them come with me by telling them my house is made out of candy. "Hello you look hungry do you want to come to my house it is made out of candy. My house has chocolate dripping from the celling ,the walls have fudge and the house is made out of all sorts of candy. This electric broom is made out of candy to do you want a ride. Now I can eat you but I need to cook I will get the oven ready and she ate him.
ReplyDeleteTHE witch pretended to be nice but she was evil,to the children and lock Hansel up in a cage and she got Gretel to be her servant.The witch made Gretel gather food for Hansel. The witch said until you get fatter I will eat you Hansel. All up and I will do that to Gretel too. She did't have time and she got a big pot of hot water and Gretel pushed her in!
ReplyDeleteI will convince the children to come in by saying
ReplyDeletei've got candy and my wallpaper is made of strawberry
and different kinds fruits.With 3 coesy beds one for
you hansel and you gretel and of corse the third one
is for me.Have some bread,cand y and fruit in fact eat
whatever you can and whatever you want because a
taste wont her you will it?Then for my plan i will say
hansel and gretel do me a favor get into the oven and
check if it's hot then when they come out and tell me
i willsay great thankyou.After i will say im making
dinner for you and then i will make some for me
as soon as they finish i will ask them to get in
the oven again then when there fat i will close
the door of the oven and cook them for mydinner.
yum yum yum delicious!!!!CANT WAIT!!!
I will tick them chocolate and send them to bed and give thim a kiss from my lips not from my heart
ReplyDeleteI asked the children if they wanted to come in my candy made cottage and they replied yes. So they came in and wanted to eat some food. I gave them a piece of candy each and said 'you can sleep in my cottage if you behave yourself '. I let them sleep in my cottage overnight. While they were sleeping, I came up with a cunning plan that when Gretal isn't looking, I will lock Hansel up in a cage and give him lots of food so he can get fat and I can boil him with onions. With Gretal , I will make her do all the work and when she is trying to turn on the oven, I will push her in the oven and bake her with roast potato.
ReplyDeleteI will convince the children to come by telling them my wallpaper is made out of blueberry and my table is made out of fudge so you can lick the table while your eating
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