Tuesday, 17 June 2014

In the wee small hours ...


There is a time in the middle of the night, when magic things are said to happen. What do you think happens during the witching hour? 

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18 comments:

  1. Nobody knows what happens in the witching hour ghosts appear and have the world to them self not really anybody should see this if you did something bad is going to happen to you. This is a story of a girl called Sophie who lived in a dormitory who was told to go to bed but didn't something bad defiantly happened to her.

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  2. Every night a giant comes out with a trumpet and dreams he get his trumpet and put the dreams on children until one day a little girl saw him. He took the girl brought her to his cave ...

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  3. in the middle of the night I woke up and I went to the window and it was Hallowin day so I saw some zombies ,ghost out side my window I was shocked....... to be contused

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  4. my dream is that me Tyrese and Jerome were plying in a football pitch

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  5. 12:00 midnight strange things are happening during the witching hour like ghosts in your bedroom wardrobe , a giant peering at you through your room window . it is a suspicious night . anything could happened to you.

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  6. the ghost come and steal you

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  7. I think during the witching there are gosts that you cannot see because they are invisible and witches that put bad potion in your brains

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  8. the un dead will rise up again at the witching hour 12 o cloak sharp all the most terrible things will happen at the witching hour spokey ghosts will arrive and brain eater zombies will come and eat your brains when it is the witching hour all the terrible thing you could imagan will happen

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  9. when the WICHING OUR, revils a deamon will grab the children and give them to the qeen wich and the nights or gards will take her to the 78th floor and keep them in a cage,under a urupting volcano!" When they are asleep the nights will open their cages and through them into the volcano.

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  10. I think hat druing the witching hour giants, witches, flying beds come and animals come alive...But one night in the middle of the witching hour someone spotted a very tall thin giant that gave her a fright

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  11. Maybe at 12o clock witches fly in to peoples houses and eat them with there sharp teeth and then they eat kids and adults brains so when ever the kids go to school they would not no anything and the adults cant take care of the children and the baby

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  12. As the clock struck midnight sophie was awake. she knew that strange things can happen at night when she was asleep. then she heard a strange noise coming from outside. she peeked at the window to look who was out there. there was a big, tall figure. to be continued........

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  13. What will happen in the witching hour? A ghost might appear in your room and sabotage all you things. The next morning when you wake up, you will see that your room has been trashed and everything has been turned over. You will never know what happened. On the next witching hour the ghost will return to your bedroom and you will here it make a noise and you will wake up! It looks milky white, with red beady eyes and it floats around the room like a feather.

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  14. In the middle of the witching hour Sophie sat out of her bed & opened the window to get some fresh air then she saw a big figure she wanted to scream but she couldn't because her blood was frozen. Then the huge figure moo-
    ved opesit of the house in front of her then the huge figure turned around & saw Sophie, Sophie quickly jumped into bed then a huge hand came out of the window.

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  15. On the witching hour strange things happen. Ghost flying in and out. Giants putting poshins though children's bedroom window.



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  16. As the clock struck 12, Sophie started to hear some very strange noises. At first she thought it was only a dream but it wasn't. But now Sophie could see a shadow sliding left to right on Sophie's wall. It was making really strange noises like this: WWWWWHHHHHHHOOOOOO! It made Sophie quiver and shiver all over her bed. Now the strange thing was coming closer and closer to her, but the problem was Sophie couldn't see what it was so she didn't know what it was. But she was determined to see what it is, so she hid under the cover and thought very hard. It was the witching hour alright and what is invisible that comes out at night. AHA! she thought it might be a creature a very tiny creature no if it was a very tiny creature then why is the shadow so big. Maybe it might be a invisible ghost. Yes! That's what it is it is a ghost. Finally, I've found the answer to my question!

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  17. If I was Sophie and It was the witching hour and there was a giant I would hide under my bed not covers
    and I would put my pillow in a row so the giant would not take me it would take the pillows and covers
    instead.

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  18. I think Sophie saw some witches flying around children's house Sophie then she ran back to her bed one of the witches saw her and the witch used her magic and took her away.

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