Wednesday, 30 April 2014

The crime scene - Part 2


Write in character what the detective might be thinking in this scene.

30 comments:

  1. Reporter: good morning viewer my name is miss Collins, and i'm am reporter for breakfast NEWS.
    sear did you see anything last night.
    also did you see or hear anything last night too?

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  2. Witness: last night I cold not sleep I heard tearbl sound I span out of bed and headed to my window and sore lilpads floting on to the flaor like frogs came

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  3. dectif what has happened hear normally this street is calm quiyt also settled and
    what are thes lilipadsdoing on the flor with a dred fall mess

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  4. Detective: What has happened here? normally this street is very quiet! What are thing green slimy lily pads doing all over the street? I must be careful they could be poisonous. better pick them up with a pencil and collet one of evidence.

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  5. detective: hmm what has happened here. a lily pad on the floor. I wonder where it came from. I must pick this evidence up with my pencil. I wonder what is on it or maybe I can pick it up with my hands but my hands must have 2 pairs of gloves on. maybe there is acid on it and I don't want to burn my little fingers.

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  6. Detective : What has happen ? It LOOKS a disaster normally this street will be so quiet .Why is there lily pads.

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  7. Detective: what are these slimy things are in street it mite bee poison so Im going to put in the bag
    they are lily pads they are slimy and poison they are yucky so picked it up with my pencil because
    it was yucky

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  8. Detective: What's going on, Normally this street is very quiet, I wonder what this slimy lily pad could be doing here. I must be really gentle with it. You never know that it could kill you if you touch it. It could be poisonous. I will use my pencil to collect it as evidence.

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  9. Detective: what has happen hear normly this street is carm and qutiyt also what are thes lilpads doing on the flore with a dred fall mess

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  10. Detective: What has happened here? lily pads all around the floor I am going to be careful for don't live my marks of my fingers and then they don't think is me who do this ...TOBE CONTINUED

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  11. Detective: What has happened here, this street was always so quiet, nothing ever happens here! Why are these green lily pads all over the street I wont touch them because maybe there poisonous so I will get one to investigate with my pencil.

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  12. Detective : what on earth has happened normally this street is quiet .I looked for clues as evidence . I picked up my pencil to get the lily pad because I don't want the hand print on my hand or the foot print

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  13. Detective: I have been called on the radio to investigate this strange crime scene in Acacia Avenue. Normally this street is so quiet! What on Earth are these slimy green lily pads doing on the rooftops, in the street and all over the cars. What could have happened??? I will have to take one down to the lab to be examined. Better use a pencil to pick it up in case its poisonous!

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  14. Detective: what happen here? I need to collect the lily pad to check what the slime is and where they came from.

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  15. Detective: WHAT have happened her. It is nice and pesthole hir what is this green lily pad I will pik the lily pad up. How did they get hir?

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  16. Detective: What happen hear? there was no lily pad in this street before? I'll use a stick instead of my hand because maybe it could be poisenes! At the middle of the night I will hide behind a bush and look at who have done these to the street.

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  17. What a strange thing to happen here. What are these weird disks on the ground and peoples homes? We are going to find where these strange things came from! We need to collect these for evidence before its too late. Get the sniffer dogs to sniff where these came from.

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  18. Detective: what happened normally this street is peace full why are there so many lily pads on the floor. Have the frogs invaded the human beings this is really strange let me use my pencil to collect the evidence because it might be piosunes to be countinued

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  19. Detective: What on Earth has happened here! It is normally nice and quiet in Acacia Avenue. Everywhere I look, I can see green slimy lily pads scattered all over the street and roofs. I need to what is on this lily pad, if I pick it up with my pencil, we might find eveidence in the lab. I had better not touch it. It could be dangersous and poisonous.

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  20. Maybe someone on an aliprane dropt all of these lily pads . Maybe frogs might have been fliying on lily pads and they might have just threw the lily pads on the floor

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  21. Detective, Who ever done this must have been dressed in a uniform so the police could not catch the culprit. Maybe at the last min the culprit must have wiped every fingerprint and footprint.

    Police, Hmm why isn't the detective holding the lily pad with the pencil not his bear hands maybe because they might think its him the culprit because his finger prints are on the lily pad.

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  22. I think the detective is thinking who could of done this and why. I think it is the cat because she is next to the police car and she mite be getting some think.

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  23. Detective: I wander what has happened here this is a DISERSTER! Maybe the man in the dressing gown mite be a suspect let me have a word with him.

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  24. The detective saying who could do this to are world and destroy my house police let me used 1 of your good dog to help me to tell me what anurth lily bad every were on people house and enny were it are frog but there are only little roof roof is there enny body looking her I can se the people did it but it was not the frogs it was the people so they don't go to prisen roof roof what the mater dog there are the people I think the man with it pajmas nose what happened to the detective hose and there was to much of people and 3 police .


















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  25. I think it would be a frog did this because last night I went in forest with my family and I so a turtle and three frogs
    were flying and the turtle were scared but that s why they just doing this for reason to be continue

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  26. The detective; was holding the lily pad on he because he do not no what on it. RFFF why is no one looking there I can see green hands on a lily pad and it look like a frog getting ready to go away o my got cant any one hear me barking.

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  27. the dog is sniffing the lily pad so they can get more evidence.

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  28. Detective: what an earth happened to the street!!! It is full off lily pads.

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  29. where are these strange green discs coming from. normaly these streets are so peaceful and clear. who would exspect this to happen on acacia avenue! I must find out who would cause such a CRIME early in the morning on ACACIA AVENUE! lets take one of these slimy discs and TAKE IT RIGHT TO THE POLICE STAITION FOR FURTHER NOTICE! TO BE CONTINUED....






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  30. Ican see a lot of lily pads and were day com from.

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